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Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 10:41 am
by Adrian
I'm not gonna be another USSA, but I'm kinda wondering where wetmonkey's warstory went. I checked the Aqua Warriors board, which is where I thought it was...no such luck. Are you gonna continue it here?
Adrian
Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 11:03 am
by wetmonkey442
I really don't know. Uh...I might continue it. If I do, I am probably going to wait a bit until the story sia bit longer before posting it. I'm glad that you guys remember it. 
Posted: Sun Jul 11, 2004 11:23 am
by wetmonkey442
I posted the story. More to come soon. I ask anyone who is reading this not to post comments on the Ultimate Story thread. Post any comment here. Thank a lot.
Edited By wetmonkey442 on 1089563050
Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2004 8:51 pm
by phire989
Posted: Mon Jul 19, 2004 9:49 pm
by leprekan
that's not it. wetmonkeys is over 50 pages size 12 on 8 1/2 x 11.
speaking of which, where is the rest of the story??????
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2004 12:45 pm
by USSA
yes i am also really wanting to read!! except i don't want to pressure the all holy wetmonkey as stress may slow his brain power and in turn his writing .... i repeat do not stress the monkey as this may cause him to do horrible things (like take that barney idea)
Posted: Wed Jul 21, 2004 4:21 pm
by leprekan
news on the story: wetmonkey's computer got some virus or something and he has no internet access. will be seeing him tomorrow; if he has more written I will tell him to bring a floppy and I will post it. :;):
Posted: Thu Jul 22, 2004 12:38 pm
by USSA
that you you kind considerate gentleman... i shall be in your debt :p
Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 3:58 am
by CPS
i just read it and its like he read my mind, with the water howitzers, water machine guns and water tank, now i have to think of more things for the story im in the middle of writing
Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:44 am
by Nick
How the #### did you have the time and imagination to write 50 pages on a water fight?!???
Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:49 am
by Veteran
He just kept writing, it's what writers do.
Posted: Tue Aug 03, 2004 5:14 pm
by leprekan
wetmonkey has internet again, but im not sure why no story. he hasn't written more.
Posted: Thu Mar 24, 2005 9:07 am
by wetmonkey442
More has indeed been written fellow water warriors. Trying to make the rest a bit more realsitic 
60 some odd pages in Word.
Soak On
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 3:28 pm
by Adrian
It feels a little forced and like it's taking itself a tad too seriously. The number of players that are involved is unbelievable...+200 in just one group doesn't seem realistic.
That said, you've done an excellent job writing. I and several other people are constantly looking forward to the next installment, and that means you've got a fan following - quite impressive.
Oh yeah...you get hit in the head hard enough to knock you out, it's quite likely you're gonna have brain damage or wake up dead (so to speak). Knockouts aren't what you see on tv.
Keep up the good work!
Adrian
Posted: Fri Mar 25, 2005 3:58 pm
by wetmonkey442
Actually, I never said he was knocked unconcious. Just stunned.
And I'm getting a bit tired of people telling me my story is unrealistic. It's not even that improbable. About 600 people in all isn't that many considering the number of people who can organize in large scale events for other hobbies. I believe once this hobby grows popular enough, we can expect to see battle with hundreds of people. You underestimate the organizational ability of several determined individuals
Thanks for the kind words and comments.
Soak On.
Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2005 3:10 pm
by Adrian
Yeah...you're right about the troop count. Immediately RIGHT NOW it's kind of unrealistic, but it may not be in the future given certain cultural climates.
Keep it up!
Adrian